I just put a loaf of sourdough bread in the oven. Now, compare that opening sentence to this one: Each week, I bake a loaf of sourdough bread. Now this one: According to the Wall Street Journal, 13% of men over the age of fifty-five bake at least one loaf of sourdough bread weekly. Don’t worry, I won’t keep making up new sentences. But I think you’d agree, they are all more or less about the same thing: somebody, somewhere, is baking sourdough bread. And, any one of these sentences would work […] Click to read more…
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